Unlaced & Undone (Sonnet)
Unlaced & Undone… It echoes through the attic, dusty, dark, a melody that soars to yearning height. In shadow, though the moon smiled brightly stark, her single window, opened to the light....
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Poured satin of regret, loosed at the seams, where love had failed to consummate the dance. Now left to wear another's broken dreams, unlaced from her desire, without glance. Through April's window,...
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MattNJake1 wrote: Poured satin of regret, loosed at the seams, where love had failed to consummate the dance. Now left to wear another's broken dreams, unlaced from her desire, without glance....
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I am in awe at the artistry of this sonnet! Super writing Sasha! PS When I grow up, I wanna write like this!
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Follow that as the saying goes. Where are the adjectives to describe this Sasha. Poured satin of regret, loosed at the seams, where love had failed to consummate the dance. Now left to wear another's...
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Sonnets I normally loathe, but you really make this one hum with fresh images and a nice flow. It doesn't seem a sonnet, but really is...that is a sign of a poet that has mastered this remarkably...
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Sasha, First read of the day and although it is not the first time I read this poem it might as well have been because it lifts off the page and sings a beautiful sonnet song. Wonderful poetry...
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Red Barchetta Drive wrote: I am in awe at the artistry of this sonnet! Super writing Sasha! PS When I grow up, I wanna write like this! ~ dear Red, I'm touched by your comment thanks you for spending...
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cusick wrote: Follow that as the saying goes. Where are the adjectives to describe this Sasha. Poured satin of regret, loosed at the seams, where love had failed to consummate the dance. Now left to...
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ottermonkey wrote: Sonnets I normally loathe, but you really make this one hum with fresh images and a nice flow. It doesn't seem a sonnet, but really is...that is a sign of a poet that has mastered...
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you are the queen of beautiful sonnets Sasha! Poured satin of regret, loosed at the seams, where love had failed to consummate the dance. Now left to wear another's broken dreams, unlaced from her...
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ruredernot32 wrote: Sasha, First read of the day and although it is not the first time I read this poem it might as well have been because it lifts off the page and sings a beautiful sonnet song....
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Samantha G K wrote: you are the queen of beautiful sonnets Sasha! Poured satin of regret, loosed at the seams, where love had failed to consummate the dance. Now left to wear another's broken dreams,...
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hey i came late but none the less found it a pleasure to read this. paul
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fistfullofwords wrote: hey i came late but none the less found it a pleasure to read this. paul ~ hey, better late, than never thank you for spending a little time with this piece, Paul... your visit...
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